you gotta tell me something

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been writing alot lately just too lazy to put it up lol.... have decided to do a couple of posts a week according to my schedule sooo stay tuned.....

Watching from a distance
Wishing from afar
That I could be beside you
Becoming a star

That is part of the chorus to a song I wrote, tell me what you think of the chorus, If you like it I will put the whole song up, if not I won't.

Can't breathe
See
Move
Eat
Unable to speak
When you walk into the room
Command attention
Just my sole observation
You got your eye on me
When you see me you walk slower
Deciding whether to come over
I wanna tap you on the should
And tell you its ok
But I don't
I won't
You need to figure that out on your own
That you are not alone

Another chorus, longer this time last one is next

Are you ready for the punishment
Nothing you can do to prevent
Can't be relentless
Keeping her clueless
Gotta clean up this mess
Yes, oh yes


Tell me what you think by commenting below and if you like my blog become a follower, will put up a new poll of the week tomorrow

WOULD IT BE A GOOD IDEA TO MAKE A SONG BOOK LINK SO YOU CAN FIND THEM EASIER, AND A MOVIE REVIEW CATEGORY, AND A BOOK REVIEW CATOGORY!!!  only used caps so more people will read it